Essay

Reilly Jodoin

9-12-11

Essay!

It was a foggy dark night, a 17 year old boy was getting off a train in New York City. A 16 year old girl was also getting off the train, coming home from Florida. The 17 year old boy Alfred had know clue where he was going. So he went over to the 16 year old girl Elizabeth, and asked her where the Radisson hotel was. She gave him directions but he did not follow so she said “here I will take you”.

          So they started walking and on the way he asked her what her name was. “My name is Elizabeth how about you”? “My name is Alfred”. They started asking questions about each other and they then became good friends. Elizabeth had just moved here with her relatives, because her mom and dad had left her when she was born. And Alfred’s parents had both died in a car accident when he was young. So now he lives with his aunt, uncle and cousins.

           They got to the hotel, and Alfred asked Elizabeth for her number, they switched numbers and Elizabeth said we should get together tomorrow, and then walked off. Elizabeth started walking home and suddenly a car stopped, the driver got out quickly and ran up to Elizabeth, threw a bag over her head, picked her up and threw her in the trunk. She was screaming for help, but nobody was around to hear her. Then the car drove away.

          Elizabeth’s aunt had been wondering where she was, her aunt called her phone many times, but there was no answer. Her aunt started to worry, so she went out looking for her. Soon after when she got home, she called the cops, they tried looking for her but they couldn’t find her either. He next day Alfred called Elizabeth but she never answered. He tried again and again, still couldn’t reach her. Elizabeth’s aunt had felling she had been kidnapped. This was not a good sign. She had been doing millions of things to find her, but still she hadn’t heard of her in day. A couple days later the police had reported, they found a body. It was Elizabeth… They couldn’t figure out who had killed her but her they did tell her aunt and she was devastated. She couldn’t believe she just lost a loved one. And Alfred had NEVER heard of her again.